The Girl With a Broken Life. (Collab)

by Courageous Dreamer   Aug 11, 2008


`Collab with James - -
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=282110

There is a girl who is drowning in tears
Forgotten her past over the years
All bottled up and full of emotion
Dropping tears like waves to the oceans

Inside she battles with the excruciating pain
The kind caused by heartbreak that she can't explain
Her heart continues to silently crack
As it breaks into a million pieces of black.

No family, no friends, no one to hold onto
She is all alone with a life she has to renew
Depression will kill her heart
And from this world she will slowly drift apart

She's left with a heart to mend
After all the tears she has tried to comprehend
Nothing will drown out the thoughts of you
For the feelings inside were so very true

Now she must move on with her broken life
Is she really going to be okay?
The sunshine will warm her heart
And tomorrow will be a brand new day

To this day, the tears have dried
And in her life she no longer has to hide
The thoughts of you no longer linger inside
for she wants them gone forever and to never reside

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nicola

    I really liked this

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    OmG I just LOVE IT !!!!
    you two wrote this perfectly, a beautiful collab

    Inside she battles with the excruciating pain
    The kind caused by heartbreak that she can't explain
    Her heart continues to silently crack
    As it breaks into a million pieces of black.

    This stanza is so heart-wrenching, very good work !!

    Keep it up =)

  • 16 years ago

    by sania Ahmed

    A VERY NICE POEM.URS WORDINGS R MARVELLOUS.URS EXPRESSION ARE EXCELLENT.REALLY A NICE POEM

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Such a beautiful write =] Excellent job!
    The emotions and imagery used in this piece were brilliant!, The flow in each stanza was also perfect and the rhyming scheme was great.

    Both of you are very good writters, well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    This was great!!!!!!!!!
    so so good
    Now she must move on with her broken life
    Is she really going to be okay?
    The sunshine will warm her heart
    And tomorrow will be a brand new day

    was my fav part 5/5

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