Comments : Break

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    Wow, I love it. It's really deep. my favorite part is the ending....
    'The reason is simple and this is why,
    Today is the day I am going to die.'
    great job........5/5
    Brittney

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Very strong words. good read

  • 16 years ago

    by cudntfindgudsn

    Don't die please.

    nice poem.