Comments : Holding Your Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    No kirstina shouldnt be afraid because your strong, let love in, and thats how you will heal, if you feel its right
    and yea this is a very good poem, but theres no suprise there:]

  • 16 years ago

    by Scarlet Angel

    Haha thnx and....idk its just after marc.....idk

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Stupid Marc, *takes out a magical eraser*
    now he is erased from your memory,ok
    now you and Adrian will be happy

  • 16 years ago

    by Scarlet Angel

    Haha thnx!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    I loved the comparison of love with the sea, along with the described emotions. it sets the stage for this hurtful love. overall your poem was short, concise, and lucid. great write. 5/5 :)