by Steven Topaz Aug 12, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I find myself looking at a new room. |
by Jessica
The last line made me tear up. a beautiful poem, you express some very strong emotions and i admire that. terrific. 5.5 |
by Sweet lig
That was really a touching piece! the feelings was very emotion and very heartfelt. all the wors are well expressed. just keep on writing all what u feel.. keep it up then 5/5 |
The end is beautiful, and I actualy got very emotional. Just be careful not to make her your WHOLE life. You've got to care about yourself first and foremost, |