Hmm all i say... just continue express all ur emotions thru writing poems. i love the emotions its kinda great flow and good protraying ur emotions in here.. i give it 5/5 as a first commentor..

Like i've said, your poetry has so much emotion in it. it gives the reader a sense of familiarity, a way to relate to your poem on a personal level. it's amazing how such simple words can bring fourth such deep feelings. this is one of my favorites, 5/5

Very beautiful. I know exactly how you feel. Im going through that right now