The Voice

by Deana   Aug 12, 2008


Lift
the voice
In sweet song
remember when
the birds sang along
your heart renewed by love
eyes open to ancient scars
sunsets speak to the distant stars
roses scent against the lovers cheek
hands joined,holding tight,lost in forever

Live with joy and hope along lifes journey
grieve not for the errors on your way
mistakes weigh heavy on the heart
speak the words you need to say
the chance may never come
to forgive the past
reveal your heart
while you can
life is
short

An etheree form is a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10
and reverse for the double etheree.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Art and philosophy together....
    one of my very my favorite recipes..

    very good and, very Real..

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful etheree... with a wonderful meaning attached to it...
    I love the message you want to send to live happily without looking back at our errors...to speack our heart...
    A special message in a special form... :)

    keep writing...
    I haven't tried this form.. it looks challenging...

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Deana you did a great job on this challenge.
    This is one of my favorite poetry forms.
    It just captures so much.
    Love Cindy

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