Happy Birthday

by Lori   Aug 12, 2008


Happy Birthday mom
You reached number forty-seven
In five years or more
You might go to heaven

Ok, I'm kidding
I love you to death
You are the reason I am living
You are in my every breath

You take away my worries
And bring me some on the way
Ok, so you cause me drama
But you're here to stay

When I'm alone
Or when I'm in the dark
With you, I'm home
On me, you leave a mark

When a guy finds me
He won't be here for long
Because with you around
You'll be sure he's wrong

So what I'm trying to say, mom
Is I totally love you
I love the way you care so much
And everything you do

I guess I'll be nice
Just for today
Enjoy it now mom
Happy Birthday!!

^^I didn't intend on putting this on here, but I thought I might as well. I know it's not the best, but I made it for my moms birthday. (obviously)

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    What a very lovely dedication for your poem..I liked the last part where you said about any guy and your mom not liking him at all no matter how good he will be, it was funny hahaha...and i loved the part where you tried to understand her in your own little ways...so cute...good one..

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Very sweet

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    Again, this poem is cute. You wrote such a sweet poem for your mom's birthday, I'm sure she respected that.
    The choosing of words here shows the benefits and problem sometimes with parents. I liked the rhyme and the flow was great.

    For another cute poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Aw. I think this is really cute. A nice poem written for your mom. I don't know if you showed this to her, but I think she would love it. Good job.

    ``Briana

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    Soooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet..i really enjoyed reading it..loved it..thnx 4 sharing it :)..

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