Awwww....this is so sweet. I hope you gave it to your mom cause she would definetly love it! This poem is so great because it came straight from your heart and it expressed your love and gratitude for your mom. Keep writing, always and forever.....

Aah darling, that was absolutely gorgeous.
I am sure your mom is really really proud of you and really appreciated the poem a lot. It was adorable and made your love for your mom evident. Its great 2 see you care so much about your mom, you only get 1 mother in life so make the most of her. This was so beautiful. Great Job, i really wish that i could give you more than a 5!!!

No your best?! First of all, look at those comments. I agree with everything they said. You are an amazing artist and have a great way of showing it. I have recently written a poem to my mother and it's called "satellites & stars". I hope you like it, i really enjoyed reading this one. keep up the amazing work. You! Have! Talent! let it shine!!!

-mandy :)

Oh wow,what an amazing poem to be dedicated to a mother in her birthday.It was really nice and so touching,I am sure that your mom will be really happy and grateful when she reads those awesome words,it's the best gift that you can give it to her because they are honest feelings.Happy birthday to her;)

well done5\5...

"So what I'm trying to say, mom
Is I totally love you
I love the way you care so much
And everything you do"
I totally love you?
That is weak, totally, how about completely?

This entire poem is thought out. Its tender and sweet.
Good job
4/5

Lexie

"Happy Birthday mom
You reached number forty-seven"
`Just from reading these two lines, it sounds like you wrote this in a actual card to your mom for her birthday. Very sweet idea to write her a poem.

"In five years or more
You might go to heaven

Ok, I'm kidding"
`Lol. This was kind of humorous. Cute.

Overall, a very sweet poem to your mother for her birthday. Hopefully you shared this wonderful write with her so that she realizes how much you really do love her. Very wonderful write dedicated to someone you love and care about deeply! 5/5

That is so sweet, and well written

Soooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet..i really enjoyed reading it..loved it..thnx 4 sharing it :)..

Aw. I think this is really cute. A nice poem written for your mom. I don't know if you showed this to her, but I think she would love it. Good job.

``Briana

Again, this poem is cute. You wrote such a sweet poem for your mom's birthday, I'm sure she respected that.
The choosing of words here shows the benefits and problem sometimes with parents. I liked the rhyme and the flow was great.

For another cute poem 5/5

Very sweet

What a very lovely dedication for your poem..I liked the last part where you said about any guy and your mom not liking him at all no matter how good he will be, it was funny hahaha...and i loved the part where you tried to understand her in your own little ways...so cute...good one..