Whispers of Love

by Beautiful Chaos   Aug 12, 2008


Softly, sweetly
In your ear
Whispers with
No trace of fear

Craving eating
At my mind
Starving for
I was confined

Trapped inside
This tiny crate
Feelings others
Can't relate

You freed me from this
Cold, dark cell
Coaxed out all
I couldn't tell

Whispers of
My growing thirst
This want of love
Must be dispersed

Those eyes, those lips
That saved my soul
Those words that touched
And helped console

A brilliant star
My shining knight
Sweet whispers of
Our loves delight

A flame that burns
Forever rages
Love that echoes
Through the ages

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  • 16 years ago

    by dante

    Beautiful flow, and nice wording throughout.

    "You freed me from this
    Cold, dark cell
    Coaxed out all
    I couldn't tell"

    definantly my fav lines, the strngth of trust in the words really reaches out to you

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I absolutely love your style of writing, and this poem was amazing!

    "A brilliant star
    My shining knight
    Sweet whispers of
    Our loves delight"

    ^Great rhyming choice and so much emotions expressed here, well done...

    "A flame that burns
    Forever rages
    Love that echoes
    Through the ages"

    A pefect ending, your word choice was excellent! Keep writing, always and forever...

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