I absolutely love your style of writing, and this poem was amazing!

"A brilliant star
My shining knight
Sweet whispers of
Our loves delight"

^Great rhyming choice and so much emotions expressed here, well done...

"A flame that burns
Forever rages
Love that echoes
Through the ages"

A pefect ending, your word choice was excellent! Keep writing, always and forever...

Beautiful flow, and nice wording throughout.

"You freed me from this
Cold, dark cell
Coaxed out all
I couldn't tell"

definantly my fav lines, the strngth of trust in the words really reaches out to you