Comments : Bring Me Home

  • 16 years ago

    by Prince Jared

    Thanks, will do

  • 16 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    I'm getting a very clear picture of a snowy day and someone bustling thru the storm following the light of the posts, and finally reaching home.
    wow
    two thumbs up!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Sry lol i didn't read the last stanza.
    um ok not reaching home, but wandering back into the storm..... hmm... =/

  • 16 years ago

    by Prince Jared

    I wasn't exactly picturing that when I wrote it, but okay! :) When I imagined was it being a humid summer night (because the lamp post lights the way), not bustling, but sort of walking slowly along, and of course, never reaching home.

  • 16 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Hahaha ok....well, i guess we do have few differents thoughts then ;)
    oh yeah and i did mean to write snowy night, cuz of the lights and yeah....sry lol it's been a loong week already =/

  • 16 years ago

    by Prince Jared

    S'okay. By the way, I can't figure out how to eliminate some 'I's from the poem without taking away from the meaning I want it to have. Anybody have any ideas?