Nice poem...It's so sweet of u to write such a poem as a dedication for ur friend...
I liked it and I wish ur friend will be better soon God willing...
*Hugs*

You know...i wasn't in the mood to read and comment any poem these past weeks but your poem has refreshed my mind and feelings

thank you

GREAT POEM

This was a very sweet and awesome poem u gave ur friend.. I love it.. Amazing job..
I truly hope ur amiga willl get better.. keep up the awesome job. =)

Aww. Well this friend of yours is very lucky to have someone like you. This poem is very strong and powerful Heba. I love it.

Open up your heart for me
Throw away it's lock
Reveal to me your darkest secrets
Push off your chest that solid rock

^^Favorite line in the whole poem! Why? Because the word choice in this stanza alone, makes this poem strong and powerful

Excellently written my friend! I gave a 5:)

A very sweet and touching dedication to your friend..One thing is for sure, she is definitely lucky to have you as a friend..Good job..

I feel the same way...
I wish I could help her.
May allah be by her side.

You are not consistent with the flow or the structure of each stanza in this piece. Your rhyming is forced. A thoughful dedication though....

Its an awsome poem miss Heba Really brillent onee, and if i were ur friend then i'd be better at once :) inshallah she will be fine ... urs Islam ...

Wish ur friend gets better soon..yeah she IS lucky 2 hav a loyal friend..cute poem :)..keep it up!!

ASSALAM O ALIKUM .Really a hrt touching poem.nicely written .i thinks that urs frnd is so lucky.bcuz she has so caring and loving friend.Hibba.i am right na

Mashallah. This is very sweet. You are obviously a very good friend and she is very lucky to have you. Its hard to find a friend like that.

*Woow sob7anallah verry good poem ! Inshallah ur friend will get well soon.. God bless