Wow, you're only 12. Lol. Mark says to comment yours too, so here ya go.

Right from the first stanza I love it. I like how you turned questioning beauty into it being within you possibly.

As my eyes follows the shooting star,
follow*

I wish that I no longer have any more heartaches,
That line is worded really funny. O_<

I grab for a the knife and become dead silent,
Many tears escape as I carve your name into the wall,
My hands twitch, as I scream I love you, a million times,
Only if you could hear it,

This is really great imagery.

I really liked it. Five out of five.

So so soooooooooooooooo romantic.

Sometimes, when we are parted from someone close to us all we can do is hope they are perhaps, watching the same star as us and at the same time, even if they are miles away. It helps to bring them closer to us I feel. Well done both of you