Love Drunk?

by Jaimee   Aug 12, 2008


I'm intoxicated by your presence
My whole world is in a slur
This feeling is unpleasant
My vision is so blurred

I'm involuntarily inebriated
When you walk into the room
I cannot think or breathe or speak
I hope the words come soon

I must now sober up
Before I tell you how I feel
No more time to be drunk
No more time to conceal

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  • 14 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    YES VERY TRUE 10/10 KEEP IT UP

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    Great use of words. I know the feeling well. Very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I like this poem very good had a lovely flow to it and the rhyme made it come together
    only suggestion: add periods. other than that good job!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Another awesome piece I LIKE YOUR
    writting style 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by monk

    I did enjoy that good job

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