Comments : Life Of Supersize

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I think the formating is original you would love some of Dylan's lyrics
    This almost rap folk style delivers a thought prvoking strong message that I need

    WELL DONE

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Great job, the meaning in this poem is very true and youv'e potrayed it very well, the flow was a little off but other than that nice work =]