Dark and furious clouds,
Make a stand-in
Now there's no stopping
The raindrops from falling
It's wet and cold and yet refreshing
My hoodie gives me warmth
Admiring life's environmental portrait
Droplets of tears from the sky
Has such a curative effect
On the earth, my troubles and wariness
When it rains
Its like the missing pieces of the jigsaw puzzle
Fits perfectly together with tears from heaven
This bliss is shared with my mother
As we speak our own tongue
At that very moment
The illustration of blissfulness
Brought back nostalgia
Hoping this moment
Would be frozen by time
"Dark and furious clouds,
Make a stand-in
Now there's no stopping
The raindrops from falling
It's wet and cold and yet refreshing"
So true, great descriptions here that created such vivid imagery in my mind. And I agree with you, rain is wet and cold but refreshing, I love going out in the rain!
"My hoodie gives me warmth
Admiring life's environmental portrait
Droplets of tears from the sky
Has such a curative effect
On the earth, my troubles and wariness"
Excellent wording here. You have amazing talent and it shines throughout this poem. Keep writing, always and forever...