Comments : XxxWhen It Rainsxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Dark and furious clouds,
    Make a stand-in
    Now there's no stopping
    The raindrops from falling
    It's wet and cold and yet refreshing"

    So true, great descriptions here that created such vivid imagery in my mind. And I agree with you, rain is wet and cold but refreshing, I love going out in the rain!

    "My hoodie gives me warmth
    Admiring life's environmental portrait
    Droplets of tears from the sky
    Has such a curative effect
    On the earth, my troubles and wariness"

    Excellent wording here. You have amazing talent and it shines throughout this poem. Keep writing, always and forever...