Sweetness

by Nightmare Fiend   Aug 13, 2008


In the misty void of my hollow soul
An angel appeared of the grandest kind
Love from her wings began to fill the hole
And I long for the day to make her mine

Addicted to her emotional pleasure
Everyday becomes a Christmas Eve
Aching to have her every treasure
The plodding of the seconds make me grieve

Her eyes are like the stabbing light
Streaming through a Stormy cloud
They stare at me with a glowing might
Making my withered soul stand proud

My heart quickens whenever she comes near
My mind fills with every personal woe
Pushing her away is my greatest fear
I have become my strongest foe

Am I the man that she needs?
Am I good enough for her desires?
Can I fulfill all the manly deeds?
Can I fuel her beautiful fire?

I would curve space and make her a star
That would shine on her where ever she went
Just to let her know I am never to far
And that I'll never forget the times we spent

In my lonely world, True Love is so rare
More precious than jewels made of pure gold
This poem is to show her how much I care
And to ask for forgiveness for being so bold

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  • 16 years ago

    by Yvonne

    Wow! That is a really good poem. You captured everything perfectly. I loved every part of it. I especially liked the part about the star. Its perfect!

    -Yvonne

  • 16 years ago

    by Asher

    Its beautiful!
    ((5))