So so sad its always hard to loose a loved one your farther no less. its uncomprehendable to know how you feel but somehow you gave us a glimpse into your pain and sorrow i very sorry for your loss but you had great flow and the emotion was intense i really liked it xxxx <33 5/5

This is a very powerful piece which has a lot of emotion in it..

i like the repetition and the questions throughout.

this is very sad and very well written.

and yes, this is defiantly one of your best.

5/5

Awwwww, hugs
this is really really good and i think you did an excellent job making this really reach out. well done xx