Comments : A hand on my shoulder

  • 16 years ago

    by charles

    Can understand all the fears and emotions here. well written, endede on a poitive note. a great write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    That is fantastic. I am so unbelievably grateful that you took the time to write this. Your an amazing poet, thankyou for speaking your heart and soul and helping the people you have, just by words. Its amazing. Very inspiring. Keep up the good work.Please. x

  • 16 years ago

    by mvep

    I get all the fear and staff you'er such a good write I lov this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Skyfire

    This poem just tears at my heart. I hope that you didn't have to go through anything like what you're describing. Its an awful experience that no one EVER deserves.

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Such a painful poem.. full of emotion, sadess, with a hint of anger throughout.
    yet a poem that some could relate.. and when you do, you just sit and stare at it.
    beautiful poem, the words were just perfect, and straight from the heart

    take care

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Great poem keep up the good work. take care.

  • 15 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Wonderfully written..beautiful.....amazing. tragic horrific and contradicting....I'm so sorry for you and your strength read through this poem is admirable.