Comments : New Beginnings.

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfection

    You paint yourself as very strong in this one. I wish you the best cakes =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "This is the start of new beginnings,
    and a life full of happiness and no more tears."

    I love these last two lines, perfect for the ending. You wrote this whole poem beautifully and your words are so true. Great feeling/emotions in this poem, and I can tell you wrote this straight from your heart. Keep writing, always and forever...