So sick...

by XoXoBriannaoXoX   Aug 13, 2008


I am so sick of pretending...
pretending i dont care...
when all i can do is wish that
you were here...

im so sick of feeling...
feeling overwhelmed inside...
when all i can do is sit and wonder why??

its alrite to feel the way i feel for
you because i know that all
my feelings for you are true.
and that i really do love you...

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  • 13 years ago

    by black winchester

    Thts js so deep..awesome..!

  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Great job with the emotion once again. The flow was a little icky, but the rhyme made up for it.

    "its alrite to feel the way i feel for
    you because i know that all
    my feelings for you are true.
    and that i really do love you..."
    ^^bring the 'you' in the 2nd line up to the first. but this stanza was my favorite.

    Good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Four Letter Lie

    Great work. i can see you struggeling to write down this emotion bbecause its so strong. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dominique

    I like this one its cute

  • 16 years ago

    by liiz

    Its hard to hide feeling isnt it?

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