Comments : A Love Affair

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Fourth stanza, first line "Youlift" to "You lift".
    Short, simple with a nice flow and a fine rhyme.

  • 16 years ago

    by StillxBreathing

    Haha. i love this! it was awesomely hilarious. =]
    5/5 definatly.