Comments : Secret footprints

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I immensely enjoyed this poem. In every single stanza, there was so much inspiration and deep meaning.

    "There are clues everywhere you go,
    Hidden secrets of the past,
    Some things you'll never know,
    And memories that'll forever last,"

    ^Wonderful word choice, and your words were so true and heartfelt.
    I really liked your ending line, very touching. You certainly have a talent for writing, and you made me smile with this poem-Keep them coming! Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 16 years ago

    by Scrittore

    Truly great poem! Each stanza flowed so perfectly to the next, and each line had so much emotion. It was definitely what I needed to read today.