Wow this poem is amazing. it has so much detail and it flows really nicely. i love it! keep on writing
~~Meaghan

This poem was really cute and I enjoyed it very much, reminds me of my Fiancee and I actually. When you meet somebody and you fall this much in love with them, you wonder how you everm ade it without there love. Excellent poem with great imagery and insight about love :) 5/5 GG23

This was really very beautiful and I couldn't help but think of my fiancee and I as I read along. I thought that thse two lines were very powerful and full of love "They can't live or breathe without the other one, For he's the night moon and she's the morning sun."
It definately describes them eaning of true love. Excellent job again 5/5 GG23

Wow very good job i like its a very nice love poem

You never fail to impress me:)
A lovely poem and story and a very difficult format...bravo!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Walking down the long aisle in a white dress,
Their bright eyes meet, loving each other no less.
Saying heartfelt words and vows meant for the two,
Until the time comes where they both say, "I do".
They smile and have a passionate deep kiss,
And forget everything, for they are in bliss.
His eyes remind her of honey, pure and gold,
While touching his soft hand is pleasurably cold.
The reception follows, with music and dance,
He glides her across the floor, with such romance.
They can't live or breathe without the other one,
For he's the night moon and she's the morning sun.
^^ ok seriously maybe you should like re write the book in poem form? : ) you could do an amazing job! You captured the essence of this part of the book perfectly!

Bella tells her friend Jacob what will occur,
But he doesn't trust Edward alone with her.
She locks up those hurtful words in her full mind,
And moves on from that point, not looking behind.
Walking outside, just grinning as rice showers,
Entering a limo, filled with sweet flowers.
Time for their honeymoon, just taking it slow,
But Edward won't tell her yet where they will go.
Boarding a flight and stiffly holding his hand,
Waiting anxiously for the small plane to land.
Exiting the airport, a taxi awaits,
He mutters silently, "its not even late".
^^ : ) I liked the wording and flow! You did a great job of saying how she just tries to shut those hurtful comments out and not even dwell on them

Then they ride smoothly in a beautiful yacht,
Hours pass by, then she sees a small white dot.
Bella looks up at Edward, completely confused,
But he stays silent, his expression amused.
Looking out at the sparkling evening waves,
The chilly night dark, like thousands of black caves.
Eyes closing fast, she drifts off to soundless sleep,
All these memories she will forever keep.
He wakes her up gently, she opens her eyes,
And sees a private island to her surprise.
Leaning in towards her, he whispers in her ear,
"Our honeymoon awaits, my beautiful dear".
^^ cute cute cute!!!!! She was so astonished when she found out ! i want to find a guy like that with all the perfect romantic surprises...

Your flow was never off and the poem itself was complete i never felt like i wanted more
5/5

It is really amazing how you took a novel that you read and turned it into a poem. You must have put alot of thought and work into it. It was very beautiful and I loved how you described the wedding. I really felt like I was watching a romantic scene straight from a movie. 5/5