Addiction

by Jaimee   Aug 13, 2008


Those drugs, they have no feelings.
Do you think that they're your friend?

Those drugs consumed your being.
Why did you start again?

Those drugs, they have you stealing.
How can this family mend?

Those drugs, they have no meaning.
Do you want your life to end?

Those drugs, they keep you feinding.
How much money have you spent?

Those drugs, they have no feelings.
Do you want to end up dead?

(This is dedicated to my father.)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alison

    I like the way this flows. Nice write. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    Very good poem. Anyone that knows or knew someone that is a drug addict can relate to this which makes it easy to read. I liked it. Very well thought out, and executed. Good job.

    And good rhymes by the way.

  • 16 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    This was very deep. i liked it. i have a lot of friends that are getting into hardcore drugs and i feel the same way about them. i too, have written poems on this. nice job :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Wow! This poem's a pack of nices: rhymes, meanings.. Etc. I like it and give u 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Awe thats sweet and meaningful truely.
    every father should at least listen to there daughters because there the ones who love them most.

    nice i liked it =]
    5/5

    ps thank you for reading my poem too... so i returnd the favor hun =]..

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