by Wolf Haines Aug 13, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Oh creature most mannered mild, |
by Lyn
A very good poem, it's strength is in its brevity. Poems are like sermons they don't need to be long to communicate the message or the emotions. The last line got me in the heart. So sad from such promise. We need to be careful where we plant our seeds. Thank you. |
by Meena Krish
That is the most painful thing..not been able to see your child. A moving write and I like your choice of words which portrays your pain..take care. |
by shenoa
Great flow and I liked your choice of words. |
by x Mo x
That was very good. Very rhythmic. I liked the subtle beat it had to it when I said it out loud. |
So simple and short, yet so much emotion can de displayed. |