Wow.. very nice.. shows emotion tht you can feel nd readers can feel similar things for every ones goes through life making different mistakes..

I've made my fair share
Of bad mistakes
I didn't know how to be a man
Now I know what it takes

tht is my favorite stanza.. out of the whole poem.. great job.. keep it up.. 5/5..

Whoa I can relate to this. Aside form the fact that it says man:P. Amazing job. 5/5