Crayola 96

by kristen   Aug 14, 2008


Crayola 96

Today I went to school,

on a big yellow bus.

I thought it would be cool,

until the driver started to fuss.

I went to my classroom,

with all the smelly kids.

I had to use the bathroom,

so I quickly did.

All the kids around me,

acted like nothing was wrong.

they cannot see what I see,

Inside the crayon box.

I found 96 bright colors,

of names I didn't know.

I was sure there was no others,

because Johnny told me so.

I quickly found my color,

my soul mate it would seem.

She was like no other,

Her name carnation pink.

As I touched her wrapping,

she started growing weak.

I heard her insides cracking,

that was the last of carnation pink.

It was then that I grew saddened,

picked up my midnight blue.

to my paper he went crashing,

And a picture he surely drew.

snapping out of sadness,

I grabbed that yellow green.

to the paper he went with madness,

Tearing up those leaves!

In my world so colored,

distant reality became.

But soon I had discovered,

the intercom had called my name.

disapointed at my drawing,

I threw the papers away.

Duty was now calling,

paperwork to be done today.

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  • 14 years ago

    by kristen

    Yeah reading it awhile after you write it you can see where it didn't flow too well. lol but thanks for the tips.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    It was cute......you did not stick to the original rhyme scheme consistently through the piece though....Some stanzas had the second and last lines rhyming and some did not. That also made it not flow very well....If you edited a bit, I think it could be better but you did a fair job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    I liked this. very light and fun

  • 16 years ago

    by Court

    Eh?????? That was kinda interesting...

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Cute good word flow to theme match.