Brothers We Are, Brothers We Will Be

by Vox   Aug 14, 2008


Best of friends,
Brothers, closer still.
We four fight and quarrel,
But mend our bonds we will.
Together we can do anything,
Apart we all fail.
So let us come together,
Together we prevail.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    PERFECT.
    :) i wish i had brothers now!! ;)
    very greatly written.

  • 16 years ago

    by StarGirl

    It isn't one of my favs but I understand the message and it's not bad.

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Ummm this one isn't one of my favorites the flow seemed off and i would have loved to see it maybe a bit longer but yeah i give it a 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Hey i love this one i have a twin sister and we are the same way so i can relate to this, plus it shows how deep your love is for your brother 5/5 its perfect

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Amazing concept... very beautiful poem. I wish I was that close with my brothers... touching poem. 5/5 Again very well-written while holding lots of emotion in such a short poem.

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