I Stand Alone

by Travis   Aug 14, 2008


My shadow is the only thing i see
I feel so empty and in misery
I cannot take it anymore
It's killing me and making me sore

Bang, bang I'm dead
I am done with what lies ahead
Forgetting my past
Helps me finally live at last

I have nothing left to say
I've fallen into a deep gray
Dreams make hopes die faster
Leaving me in a total disaster

I stand alone in this dark room
All this hate i consume
I've tried and prayed
But it only leaves me cold everyday

I just ask that you stay
To take all the pain away
I stand alone till the end
My hand is all i extend

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  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    Very deep and i did not have to wait to read another grate poem i love it so much you are a good poet

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Some I's need to be capitolized otherwise I thought this poem said sooo much. It really shows how the author is feeling so clearly. Umm, wow. Flow was so smooth, I was impressed. (: 5/5 Amazing job!

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Ended nice
    good flow

    Dreams make hopes die faster
    Leaving me in a total disaster
    --fav. part

  • 16 years ago

    by Nameless Useless

    Pretty good, your style appeals to me. i like it, 5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Wow very deep poem hun you can feel the pain. if you ever need anyone to talk to were all here. but great poem you're very talented.

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