Wow very deep poem hun you can feel the pain. if you ever need anyone to talk to were all here. but great poem you're very talented.

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Pretty good, your style appeals to me. i like it, 5

Ended nice
good flow

Dreams make hopes die faster
Leaving me in a total disaster
--fav. part

Some I's need to be capitolized otherwise I thought this poem said sooo much. It really shows how the author is feeling so clearly. Umm, wow. Flow was so smooth, I was impressed. (: 5/5 Amazing job!

Very deep and i did not have to wait to read another grate poem i love it so much you are a good poet