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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "The sweet sound of laughter fills the air
    Children running happily with no care
    The sky is blue and not so cloudy
    This perfect day is alright"

    I love this stanza, gives off a filling of happiness and joy!

    "The years go by we aren't there
    we are spirits that soar the air
    we watch for our young we protect
    this earth we are one with mother nature"

    I liked your ending a lot, nice work. Keep writing, always and forever.....