Still have time?

by Holly Emma   Aug 14, 2008


Someone stop the time
someone please tell me what's going on
Thoughts races through my mind
Do I still have time?

Someone tell me to stay
someone tell me its ok
I'm losing my mind
Do I still have time?

Someone hold on to me
someone tell me I'm safe
I am frightened from the shock
Do I still have time?

Someone tell me I'm free
Someone tell me I'm ok
Please stay close to me
Before I fade away.

Someone don't tell me lies
Someone hold me until I stop the cries
Before the night grows on
Do I still have time?

Someone tell my parents
Someone tell my friends
I'm loosing my faith
I'm finally gone...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Holly Emma

    O.o I never really noticed.

  • 16 years ago

    by DarkCrystalbtrfy

    I liked your use of rhyme in this poem. I can defenatly understand and realte to what your going through. Keep writing down your feelings even if you get angry or feel as though theres no hope. Because writing things out can help you make sense of what your going through.

    I only have one thing to say that confused me about your poem:
    Someone tell me I'm free
    Someone tell me I'm ok
    Please stay close to me
    Before I fade away.

    in all of you other stanzas you have a diffrent end line. Did you mean to do this? or was it because you diddent notice?
    Anyway
    Well Written

  • 16 years ago

    by shadowed heart

    Hold in there! a permanent solution to a temporary problem isnt worth it believe me