Hold in there! a permanent solution to a temporary problem isnt worth it believe me

I liked your use of rhyme in this poem. I can defenatly understand and realte to what your going through. Keep writing down your feelings even if you get angry or feel as though theres no hope. Because writing things out can help you make sense of what your going through.

I only have one thing to say that confused me about your poem:
Someone tell me I'm free
Someone tell me I'm ok
Please stay close to me
Before I fade away.

in all of you other stanzas you have a diffrent end line. Did you mean to do this? or was it because you diddent notice?
Anyway
Well Written

O.o I never really noticed.