Puppets

This is an amazing poem! A very good topic if i must say i've been reading a lot of poems about love and this is a nice change. this will get 5/5 from me

To say the sad truth, I see what my friends say when they say I'm a puppet to my boyfriend. And it's true, sad to say. I wonder and would like to ask you, did you take this out of life experience? Because if you did, its amazing prospect of it, the visionary of it also. You deserve a 5/5

Although based on horrible events no one should have to experience, in a literary sense, the poem leaves a lot to be desired. It is full of filler words and forced rhyming. A very simple choice of words and the flow was horrible.

Very interesting subject. I liked the first line, it really grabs your attention, the second line really makes sure you stay.

I'm glad to see some older writers like myself.

I'm hoping it's not true, but if it is, then i'm sorry. The only shining light out of that is that you can write amazing poems about it.

Pretty obvious that we are all puppets at some point in our lives if not for all of it. We do the things we do because we have to and we have no choice in the matter. Excellent job and very true message 5/5 GG23