Wow, all the emoitions there. All I can say is I really liked this write. Especially loved the way it ended! 5/5

Wow that was crazy and so well writen i really liked the poem it was really good.

NICE! well written and deep! good emotion! 5/5

I htink about the pain - spelling (think) x

do you have any idea how much stregnth i need, just to hold on? spelling (strength) x

strong feelings of anger in this poem and i can feel the hate towards this guy. but just think that all the things he has done and all the pain he has left you. making hiim think he is big and tough and shows no fear... remember each day all he will be thinking about is that you could have him put away in jail and in reality you are the strong one with all the power to his fears.

nice job xx