by Crazy n luv Aug 14, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
How could you sit there and just watch me cry |
LOVE IT!!!!!! |
Your poem was quite good but a few spelling mistakes You wrote in two places Know one instead of no one and liefs instead of lifes, you said be honest so i was. Otherwise well written and well done |
by confused
I liked it i guess |
by fakesmile
Dang girl! diz poem is tight! 5/5 |
by Saving Grace
I love it!! so much emotions and its kinda sad. but i loved it. its heaps goodly! :) 5/5 |