by cher Aug 14, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
We started out friends, came to love one another, An innocent kind of love I thought would last forever. Afraid to be loved, afraid to give in. . . . Dont let your guard down and never give in. The sound of your voice, your touch on my skin, and your sweet tender kiss, in love I fell right in. So you took my hand and showed me the way. Taught me about love and said everything will be ok. I gave you my heart, I gave you my all. I made you my everything, not knowing later I'd be losing it all. You gave me your love and affection, I became your best friend, someone who was always there to listen. The love we had together no doubt, was one of a kind. I love you, I hate you, need you or leave you, we just couldn't decide. Til' the day my heart was shattered , I wanted to die.All because you cheated and lied. Ive made my decision to move on without you in my life. GOODBYE |
by Mia
This is really good. And had a nice flow. |
by Hollymariee
I really like this poem.. I can really relate to it right now. In my own opinion i think you should break it up so it flows easier.. But otherwise theres nothing else. |
by Yeka
Love your poem I truly love it keep up the wonderful work k =) |