Comments : Desolate's Diary

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    RL
    What a heartbreaking piece you have penned. Hunger is a problem world wide. When it is a child it is such a tragedy. No child anywhere should ever have to feel the pain of hunger. You have done a fantastic job brining this subject to light. The imagery and word choices are great!
    Take care
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Keep it up... Good wright

  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Very powerful write. so true. awesome! liked your poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    World hunger is a disgrace and a shame, more so because of the children. I thank God each night for the food he provides for me and that he will provide the same for all the hungry in the world. World hunger has made me more conscious of not wasting food as I once did many years ago. You used such few words to deliver such a profound message. Excellent.