Let me forget this pain
by Michelle Aug 14, 2008
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Every time I think of it I cry |
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16 years ago
"I feel empty and hopeless i have nobody to
talk to !"
all the "i's in this poem should be capitalized. A comma is needed after "hopeless".
Otherwise, this is pretty short, I do feel like you could add more on. But what you have so far I like. Keep writing, always and forever....
