Eternal Love

by Sora   Aug 15, 2008


I heard you were in town,
But I didn't want to see you.
Because I didn't want the pain,
That in the past you've put me through.

But the most vivid thing I remember,
Are those dark brown eyes of yours.
Because they told me everything,
That our love stood for.

And when I think of those eyes,
I'd really wish you'd call.
But then I think back and see,
How our relationship took that fall.

We fell down to the bottom,
Of the love we've lost and all the tears.
And I still can't believe,
I love you exactly the same, after all these years.

And even though the pain you've caused,
Hasn't healed within me.
I just want you to patch up my wounds,
So my spirit can finally be set free.

Even though I miss you more each day,
And when I see the stars, I see your face.
But I always think to my self, there's noone,
In this world that could ever take your place.

And I hope you know I gave you my heart,
And you still have it to this day.
But my love for you is eternal,
Nothing or noone can take it away.

This is also about my first love. some feelings never change i suppose. i just had to express myself. thank you all for reading! please tell me what you think.

-Ashlei.

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  • 15 years ago

    by ShyandHurt

    Very good! I really like this one. Flows well and hits emotions right on.

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    This was really good. it was kinda sad too. i could relate to this in my own situation. very touching words. good job expressing urself 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ezzey

    I would like to give you 6/5 or even 10/5 ..,this poem is very wonderful ,it shows sinecrety and true love ,really you are blessed that you have this sweet heart in you ..
    We fell down to the bottom,
    Of the love we've lost and all the tears.
    And I still can't believe,
    I love you exactly the same, after all these years

    Even though I miss you more each day,
    And when I see the stars, I see your face.
    But I always think to my self, there's noone,
    In this world that could ever take your place.

    this was really very touching !!

  • 16 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    This was beautiful and so sentimental, i think there are lots of people out there who can relate. keep your chin up; i know it's hard to lose a guy who was really important to you. sometimes love never dies and you expressed that perfectly. you're a great poet and i loved the rhythm.
    and thanks for the comment.
    5/5 :D

  • 16 years ago

    by his blue eyed baby

    Beautiful!