by Sora Aug 15, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I heard you were in town, |
by ShyandHurt
Very good! I really like this one. Flows well and hits emotions right on. |
by dora
This was really good. it was kinda sad too. i could relate to this in my own situation. very touching words. good job expressing urself 5/5. |
by Ezzey
I would like to give you 6/5 or even 10/5 ..,this poem is very wonderful ,it shows sinecrety and true love ,really you are blessed that you have this sweet heart in you .. |
This was beautiful and so sentimental, i think there are lots of people out there who can relate. keep your chin up; i know it's hard to lose a guy who was really important to you. sometimes love never dies and you expressed that perfectly. you're a great poet and i loved the rhythm. |
Beautiful! |