Lol..! I like it very much.. Keep on.. 5/5

Of all the topics we can write about, none is more important than that of love. First loves are extra special because they open our hearts and eyes to a whole new world. Good write!

Its a great writeing by far. Way better than something I can ever do. Very talented, one of the best I read all day ^^ great job!!!

If you wish to comment me back, please comment mary mary if you don't mind, you don't have too but you can if you wish ^^

Beautiful!

This was beautiful and so sentimental, i think there are lots of people out there who can relate. keep your chin up; i know it's hard to lose a guy who was really important to you. sometimes love never dies and you expressed that perfectly. you're a great poet and i loved the rhythm.
and thanks for the comment.
5/5 :D

I would like to give you 6/5 or even 10/5 ..,this poem is very wonderful ,it shows sinecrety and true love ,really you are blessed that you have this sweet heart in you ..
We fell down to the bottom,
Of the love we've lost and all the tears.
And I still can't believe,
I love you exactly the same, after all these years

Even though I miss you more each day,
And when I see the stars, I see your face.
But I always think to my self, there's noone,
In this world that could ever take your place.

this was really very touching !!

This was really good. it was kinda sad too. i could relate to this in my own situation. very touching words. good job expressing urself 5/5.

Very good! I really like this one. Flows well and hits emotions right on.