Comments : A Wish

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Yes good theme and flow.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "To journey home
    Became his concern
    To rejoin his parents
    For their love did he yearn"

    Excellent word choice and rhyme. A very pleasurable poem to read, that had a deep meaning. Keep writing, always and forever.....

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Thank you again

  • 15 years ago

    by Bugg

    This was cute. I loved the first 3 stanzas, but the last one was my favorite. I haven't left home yet, but I'm going to next year for college. I imagine this poem will represent me in a few years! lol Very good write.