Comments : Chance of love

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "I dont ant to live without you
    But what else can i do?"

    dont should be don't.
    ant should be want.

    Otherwise, I liked this poem, good emotions. Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow!! ya.. we are all afraid.. and i know how u feel been there and might still be there.. Very amazing job...