Thats some deep stuff, i like the flow to the poem its different. i also like what the poem is about, i can relat

Hey thanks for the comments abd thanks if you ever want to talk bout anything ill be here

Wonderful poem it was very amaxing deep deep stuff! I like the flow i like the word choice and i can deff relate

Oh.. wow this was deep n powerful.. i can relate to this.. awesome job.. keep it up!

Goodness nick, that's a wonderful display of such heartache. life's a conundrum, and your right, first love's usually never remain. they hurt the most but they teach the greatest of lessons. i liked this stanza the most
"ive tried to love again
baby its true
but it just doesnt feel right
like im cheating on you"
thats wicked powerful, and so true. i know what thats like. ilu, and keep up the great work, and that chin! ;)
5/5!
Belle