Pain

by PassionCourageTriumph   Aug 15, 2008


There seems to be no escape from pain.

It just takes you over as it's domain

There is no mercy and there is no refrain.

There is no way that it may be detained.

After you've had enough,
You act without delay.

You hold that knife to your wrist ,
and you cut away.

As you're watching the blood wash down the drain,
You feel the numbness take over the pain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tyler Durden

    Short, simple and damn sweet.

    this isnt about suicide, its about coping.
    Its the escape of many people, and the thoughts of hundreds more.

    The ryhming was a good, and the picture of pain.

    But even I, me, experienced in this art myself, have to ask;

    Why counter pain, with pain?

    Keep up the good work, and you'll be onto a winner :)

    Tyler

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Hantman

    This is sad:-(
    good but suicides a depresseing topic.
    im glad you cheered up a bit.

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