Life

by Nafees Ahmad   Aug 15, 2008


Life is full of colors,
full of joys
full of butterflies
full of beauties.
that was think
when i was young.
but now as i get older
life is only full of cries,
full of troys
full of adversities....

It's Life.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by adroit

    Wow this poem is beautiful. And so true. Life seems to get harder and harder as we get older, but the beauty is still there, and will always be there. Sometimes you have to look hard for the beautiful parts, but you'll always be rewarded. Excellent writing. Honest Luck.

    Sarah