That poem is amazing.
I used to cut.
I still have urges to do it.
I stopped because I got caught though.
I now have to see a counselor and a psychiatrist.

*Tear*

Very good.

(If this poem is true)
I'm sorry yu have to be so broken as well.

5/5

Well done, very nicely put, although it is so sad. I found the flow was rough in some parts and theres a few spelling errors. But, apart from that, this is an amazing write. I really liked it.

A girl Whose smile fooled the world
A girl who stands at a cliff.
A girl whose broken beaten destroyed
woundering if she will be missed

As the waves crash agaist the rocks
She knows her death is near
But its all she ever wanted
So she jumped without any fear

As she hit the water.
her life ends with a splash
A girl whose smile fooled the world
Gone in a flash.

Those last 3 stanzas were my favorite tho. a perfect end to a great write. Full of emotion and intensity. Very powerful write. Very well done. 5/5