Comments : At the Center of my World

  • 16 years ago

    by Synyster

    Beautifully flowing piece of work with wonderful word choices. I think someone's in love <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I can so relate, and i loved the honesty and gentleness about this. It was so sweet and flowed well throughout

  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    Interesting. Very emotional towards the end. Obviously the character is longing for someone to be with them. You described how much emotion they felt very well. Good job.